Tuesday, June 19, 2007

Tommy Walnuts

I don't know how many times I trudged up that hill with his lunch. Mother said he was kind to us when we needed it, so we need to look after him now that's he's alone. Me, I just do what I'm told.

I didn't know what to call him. He looked even older than he was, and he was nothing and nobody to me. He sensed it. He seemed to know everything although he never went out.

"Everyone calls me Tommy Walnuts."

OK, then. I'd sit in the milky sunshine next to the cobwebby window and watch him eat, while the cats - his cats?- the cats did figure eights through his legs. In all the time I was ever there I never saw him show the slightest interest in those creatures, but they hung by him like he was their mother. It was like he was the sun they orbited.

He never spoke while he ate. He'd murmur or grunt if you asked him a question, but shoot you a sort of withering look that made you refrain from asking another. When he was done, he'd take out a tin of tobacco and make himself a cigarette, and he'd smoke and he'd turn his eye towards yours, and it was like a signal that you could ask him something. He never asked me anything, except: How is your mother?

I can't explain what that man knew, because he seemed to know everything. I'd go to school and the nuns would try to pound the numbers and the words and some sense into my head. It took a lot of hammering; at least at first. But then I had a mission. I wanted to ask this man something he did not know. I'd read at recess and at home and I'd sit in the library like a girl and scan the pages looking for the thing Tommy Walnuts would not know. I couldn't find it.

How long is the Great Wall of China? How do you calculate the hypotenuse of a right triangle? Who was the third vice-president of the United States? Did you know the Titanic had a sister ship?

"Two," he said, and send me home to scour the shelves again.

One day he looked rough. He always looked old and beat, but he seemed sick. He coughed a lot when he smoked.

"Are you all right?"

"I am always the same. Makes no difference. Ask your questions."

"How did you end up all alone here?"

He took a long drag on the cigarette. He looked around the empty room like a man on a stage surveying the audience before delivering his line. It was the first time he had ever even paused before answering me. I heard the clock tick, and the soft indistinct sound of a cat purring under his chair. A car sizzled past on the wet pavement outside.

He looked at me differently than before. I was sorry I had asked that. I'd gone too far. I was losing so I upset the board.

"I'm not alone. You are here."

Tommy Walnuts knew everything.

5 comments:

Patsy said...

I've been busy and haven't commented lately, but this deserves at least a brief recognition. You are a wonder ful writer, and I just wish you'd put away your saw for a minute and start something--short stories, the great American novel--I don't care what. I'll read it.
"I sat in the library like a girl"--you distilled your narrators character in one little phrase. Do you realize what a gift that is? Do something with it besides blog.
ps--I know I owe you a picture. Like most people, I keep treasured old photos in the junk drawer in the utility room. I could swear the picture I wanted to send you was there. Clear autumn light, bronzy mums in front of the house, and the trees blazing with color--one an unbearable gold, and one a scarlet that would take your breath away. My neighbor across the street took it, and now I can't find it. I'll keep looking--I'm sure you're not holding your breath, but I'm upset that I can't find it.

SippicanCottage said...

Patsy- That was a very gracious compliment and I'm grateful for it.

Uncle Mikey said...

Good stuff

Wolf Flywheel said...

Excellent anectode. You leave the reader wishing to know a little more about Tommy Walnuts and a lot more about the main character's experiences with other situations. You express yourself quite well and portry the setting vivdly enough for the reader to construct images of these encounters in their mind almost involuntarily. I appreciate this type of writing very much. Thank you for it.

SippicanCottage said...

Wolf- Great picture you chose to go with your handle.

Thanks for reading and commenting.I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I don't know where the people in these stories come from. I just find a picture and write whatever comes into my head.

It's roomy in there, I guess.